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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Is this comment natural?

Found this on the internet.

When you have played TS2 on PC before and play the PS2 version. When you die the first time you will think that the game is over but it's not. You are a ghost. xD

  

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mosja : Is this comment natural? No. The first part is just a when -clause with no independent clause to go with it.

— CalifJim

  • mosja : Is this comment natural?
  • No.
  • The first part is just a when -clause with no independent clause to go with it.
  • The rest is OK, though there should be a comma after 'first time' and after 'over'.
  • CJ
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mosja: Is this comment natural?

No. The first part is just a when-clause with no independent clause to go with it.

The rest is OK, though there should be a comma after 'first time' and after 'over'.

CJ

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