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Farib Posted 12 years ago
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Is this business letter correct?
To Whom It May Concern:
We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants.
we would like to participate in your exhibition
Thus we need to get some information about exhibition . Could you please send us further details: how to hire place for submit our products, measurement of place you offer, price of hired place, how much and where should we get paid its price and any other necessary information.
Sincerely yours,
farib
Manager of Sales
We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants.
we would like to participate in your exhibition
Thus we need to get some information about exhibition . Could you please send us further details: how to hire place for submit our products, measurement of place you offer, price of hired place, how much and where should we get paid its price and any other necessary information.
Sincerely yours,
farib
Manager of Sales
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we would like to participate in your exhibitionThus we need to get some information about exhibition . Sincerely yours,faribManager of Sales I've tried to make a little better. To Whom It May Concern: We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants.
- we would like to participate in your exhibitionThus we need to get some information about exhibition .
- Sincerely yours,faribManager of Sales I've tried to make a little better.
- To Whom It May Concern: We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants.
- We are interested in participating in your exhibition.
- Therefore , we need some information about your exhibition like how we can rent a place to submit our products, how big is the place that you offer, the rental fee, and how much and where you will pay us.
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Farib To Whom It May Concern:We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants.we would like to participate in your exhibitionThus we need to get some information about exhibition . Could you please send us further details: how to hire place for submit our products, measurement of place you offer, price of hired place, how much and where should we get paid its price and
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I change some words , is it ok?
We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants. We are interested in participating in your exhibition. Therefore , we need some information about your exhibition like how we can rent a Booth to submit our products, how big is the exhibition space that you offer for each exhibitor, the rental fee, and how much and where you
We are an Iranian company that deals in houseplants. We are interested in participating in your exhibition. Therefore , we need some information about your exhibition like how we can rent a Booth to submit our products, how big is the exhibition space that you offer for each exhibitor, the rental fee, and how much and where you
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