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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this awkwardly long?

In my eagerness to snap a picture of the amazing view, I tripped and dropped the phone out of my hand and off the roof.

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In my eagerness to snap a picture of the amazing view, I tripped and dropped the phone off the roof.

  • In my eagerness to snap a picture of the amazing view, I tripped and dropped the phone off the roof.
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In my eagerness to snap a picture of the amazing view, I tripped and dropped the phone off the roof.

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