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AlexandreAnother Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is this awkward sentence correct?

We shall now describe the process whereby the plan of the process is effective.
  

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Hi, We shall now describe the process whereby the plan of the process is effective. No. I don't see the meaning here.

  • Hi, We shall now describe the process whereby the plan of the process is effective.
  • No.
  • I don't see the meaning here.
  • You need to say it in another way.
  • You might want to look at the verb 'implement'.
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Hi,
We shall now describe the process whereby the plan of the process is effective.

No. I don't see the meaning here. You need to say it in another way.

You might want to look at the verb 'implement'.

Clive
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AlexandreAnotherWe shall now describe the process whereby the plan of the process is effective.

How about:
We will now describe the process which has proven to be effective.

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