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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Is this an accurate way of punctuating this?
Hi!
I am trying to create a buisness card template - I want to put this under my business' name, but am unsure if it is a sentence. Can someone please help me?
Tender Day Produce is the name of my business, and
Creating and Sustaining; Life. is what I want it to say underneath...
I dont want to put that on my card if it isn't a proper way to use a semi-colon. Could someone enlighten me?
--Additionally, I really like the 'L' in Life to be Capitalized, but it should technically be lower case as life isn't a proper noun...?right but then again, it is sort of in a title...? I just don't know..
I know it 'should' just read "Creating and Sustaining Life." but I like the double entendra the semi colon adds thats what i'm going for...
any thoughts?
Thanks so much--!
I am trying to create a buisness card template - I want to put this under my business' name, but am unsure if it is a sentence. Can someone please help me?
Tender Day Produce is the name of my business, and
Creating and Sustaining; Life. is what I want it to say underneath...
I dont want to put that on my card if it isn't a proper way to use a semi-colon. Could someone enlighten me?
--Additionally, I really like the 'L' in Life to be Capitalized, but it should technically be lower case as life isn't a proper noun...?right but then again, it is sort of in a title...? I just don't know..
I know it 'should' just read "Creating and Sustaining Life." but I like the double entendra the semi colon adds thats what i'm going for...
any thoughts?
Thanks so much--!
Top answer
Hi, The semi-colon is totally wrong in temrs og grammar, and I certainly don't see the added meaning that you want. I would say that most people would want to avoid a semi-colon because they would think of it as unnecesssry clutter on a card. I understand the phrase 'Creating and Sustaining Life', but it doesn't give me a clear idea about what your business is.
- Hi, The semi-colon is totally wrong in temrs og grammar, and I certainly don't see the added meaning that you want.
- I would say that most people would want to avoid a semi-colon because they would think of it as unnecesssry clutter on a card.
- I understand the phrase 'Creating and Sustaining Life', but it doesn't give me a clear idea about what your business is.
- In what way do you create life?
- Clive
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Hi,
The semi-colon is totally wrong in temrs og grammar, and I certainly don't see the added meaning that you want.
I would say that most people would want to avoid a semi-colon because they would think of it as unnecesssry clutter on a card.
The semi-colon is totally wrong in temrs og grammar, and I certainly don't see the added meaning that you want.
I would say that most people would want to avoid a semi-colon because they would think of it as unnecesssry clutter on a card.
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