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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this all worded in the best way?

Despite his exalted lineage, Cyan was something of a weakling among dragons, and utterly lacked true courage or loyalty. However, he possessed a mind that was cunning and subtle even beyond the norm of green dragons, and used that to his advantage.
  

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Delete the comma after 'dragons', and place it after 'subtle'.

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  • Delete the comma after 'dragons', and place it after 'subtle'.
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Delete the comma after 'dragons', and place it after 'subtle'.
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Thanks for your help, but should I delete the comma after the first or second 'dragons'?
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cboutin3Thanks for your help, but should I delete the comma after the first or second 'dragons'?
On second thought, keep the comma, but you do need one where I suggested.
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