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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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He immediately began the training of the Juramona Militia, including teaching the soldiers the tactics that would allow them to defeat mounted opponents. Only twelve days later, the Ergothians faced an attack from a band of five hundred nomads. By using the spearmen techniques that had been taught to them by Tol, the Juramona Militia withstood the nomads’ charge and forced them to retreat.
  

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He immediately began training the Juramona Militia, teaching the soldiers tactics to defeat mounted opponents. Only twelve days later, the Ergothians were attacked by a band of five hundred nomads. Using the spear techniques that Tol had taught them, the Juramona Militia withstood the nomads’ charge and forced them to retreat.

  • He immediately began training the Juramona Militia, teaching the soldiers tactics to defeat mounted opponents.
  • Only twelve days later, the Ergothians were attacked by a band of five hundred nomads.
  • Using the spear techniques that Tol had taught them, the Juramona Militia withstood the nomads’ charge and forced them to retreat.
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He immediately began training the Juramona Militia, teaching the soldiers tactics to defeat mounted opponents. Only twelve days later, the Ergothians were attacked by a band of five hundred nomads. Using the spear techniques that Tol had taught them, the Juramona Militia withstood the nomads’ charge and forced them to retreat.

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