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Once Tol reached the sorcerer’s camp, he discovered that the true master behind the capture of the Juramona soldiers was Dermount. When Dermount attempted to use his magic against Tol, it again somehow failed, so the two of them engaged in a duel that ended in the renegade mage’s death. With the traitor’s death, the magic that imprisoned the Ergothians was released, and it was revealed by Dermount’s henchmen that the dark sorcerer had planned on using his magic to take on the appearance of Enkian and assume his place at the conclave in Daltigoth. The Juramona delegation then continued their journey to Daltigoth, and arrived in the capital after only a few more days of travel.
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On reaching the sorcerer’s camp, Tol discovered that the true master behind the capture of the Juramona soldiers was Dermount. Dermount's attempt to use his magic against Tol failed, so the two engaged in a duel ending in the renegade mage’s death. With the traitor’s death, the magic that imprisoned the Ergothians was released, and Dermount’s henchmen revealed that the dark sorcerer had planned on using his magic to assume the appearance of Enkian and take his place at the conclave in Daltigoth.
- On reaching the sorcerer’s camp, Tol discovered that the true master behind the capture of the Juramona soldiers was Dermount.
- Dermount's attempt to use his magic against Tol failed, so the two engaged in a duel ending in the renegade mage’s death.
- With the traitor’s death, the magic that imprisoned the Ergothians was released, and Dermount’s henchmen revealed that the dark sorcerer had planned on using his magic to assume the appearance of Enkian and take his place at the conclave in Daltigoth.
- The Juramona delegation then continued their journey to Daltigoth, arriving in the capital in only a few more days.
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On reaching the sorcerer’s camp, Tol discovered that the true master behind the capture of the Juramona soldiers was Dermount. Dermount's attempt to use his magic against Tol failed, so the two engaged in a duel ending in the renegade mage’s death. With the traitor’s death, the magic that imprisoned the Ergothians was released, and Dermount’s henchmen revealed that the dark sorcerer had planned
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