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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Mina is the prophet. This caused insurrection and chaos within the Dark Knighthood, and Targonne immediately began plotting a way to have Mina assassinated to end the threat to his command. When the magical shield around the elven nation of Silvanesti fell as a result of Mina’s machinations, Targonne had one of his agents place a poisoned ring that would be a gift for (her/the prophet) within the room of the elven king Silvanoshei Caladon.
  

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This caused insurrection and chaos within the Dark Knighthood, and Targonne immediately began plotting Mina's assassination in order to end the threat to his command. When the magic shield around the elven nation of Silvanesti fell as a result of Mina’s machinations, Targonne had one of his agents place a poisoned ring as a gift for the prophetess in the elven king Silvanoshei Caladon's room.

  • This caused insurrection and chaos within the Dark Knighthood, and Targonne immediately began plotting Mina's assassination in order to end the threat to his command.
  • When the magic shield around the elven nation of Silvanesti fell as a result of Mina’s machinations, Targonne had one of his agents place a poisoned ring as a gift for the prophetess in the elven king Silvanoshei Caladon's room.
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This caused insurrection and chaos within the Dark Knighthood, and Targonne immediately began plotting Mina's assassination in order to end the threat to his command. When the magic shield around the elven nation of Silvanesti fell as a result of Mina’s machinations, Targonne had one of his agents place a poisoned ring as a gift for the prophetess in the elven

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