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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Pakin III’s orders to Odovar were that the three hordes of Juramona were to march south to Caergoth, where they would join the other imperial hordes in the war against the forest tribes. The first horde was the Plains Panthers, which was led by the fierce and taciturn warrior Pagas. The Plains Panthers were veterans of the Ackal-Pakin War, and Odovar himself traveled in this horde.
  

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Pakin III’s orders to Odovar were that the three hordes of Juramona were to march south to Caergoth, where they would join the other imperial hordes in the war against the forest tribes. The first horde was the Plains Panthers, led by the fierce and taciturn warrior Pagas. The Plains Panthers were veterans of the Ackal-Pakin War, and Odovar himself traveled in this horde.

  • Pakin III’s orders to Odovar were that the three hordes of Juramona were to march south to Caergoth, where they would join the other imperial hordes in the war against the forest tribes.
  • The first horde was the Plains Panthers, led by the fierce and taciturn warrior Pagas.
  • The Plains Panthers were veterans of the Ackal-Pakin War, and Odovar himself traveled in this horde.
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Pakin III’s orders to Odovar were that the three hordes of Juramona were to march south to Caergoth, where they would join the other imperial hordes in the war against the forest tribes. The first horde was the Plains Panthers, led by the fierce and taciturn warrior Pagas. The Plains Panthers were veterans of the Ackal-Pakin War, and Odovar himself traveled in this horde.

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