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Regobart and his thirty hordes met the Tarsan attack head on, while Tol and his troops remained hidden and waited for the most opportune moment to strike. Regobart’s force was pushed back by the ferocity of the Tarsan attack and by an elite fighting unit which consisted of four enormous turtles that each carried upon its back a tall wooden structure. The Tarsans had bought the creatures at great expense from the breeders of Silvanesti, where they were used to tow ferries across the Thon-Thala River.
  

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Regobart and his thirty hordes met the Tarsan attack head on, while Tol and his troops remained hidden and waited for an opportune moment to strike. Regobart’s force was pushed back by the ferocity of the Tarsan attack and by an elite fighting unit of four enormous turtles, each bearing a tall wooden howdah . The Tarsans had bought the expensive creatures from the breeders of Silvanesti, where they were used to tow ferries across the Thon-Thala River.

  • Regobart and his thirty hordes met the Tarsan attack head on, while Tol and his troops remained hidden and waited for an opportune moment to strike.
  • Regobart’s force was pushed back by the ferocity of the Tarsan attack and by an elite fighting unit of four enormous turtles, each bearing a tall wooden howdah .
  • The Tarsans had bought the expensive creatures from the breeders of Silvanesti, where they were used to tow ferries across the Thon-Thala River.
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Regobart and his thirty hordes met the Tarsan attack head on, while Tol and his troops remained hidden and waited for an opportune moment to strike. Regobart’s force was pushed back by the ferocity of the Tarsan attack and by an elite fighting unit of four enormous turtles, each bearing a tall wooden howdah. The Tarsans had bought the expensive creatures from the bre

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