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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Though they did not realize it at the time, the companions would become the key to the salvation of Ansalon, due to the young Qué-Shu princess Goldmoon, who had been given the Blue Crystal Staff of the healing goddess Mishakal by her beloved, and Raistlin, whose body was weak, but whose blood burned with magic. Shortly after the heroic group formed in Solace, Goldmoon became the first cleric of the true gods of light since before the Cataclysm. In the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth, Goldmoon found faith, as she embraced Mishakal and recovered the Disks of Mishakal, platinum disks containing the knowledge of the gods of light. This would be pivotal to the return of other true clerics to the world, to fight against the clerics of Takhisis.
  

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Although they did not realize it at the time, the companions would become the key to the salvation of Ansalon, because of the young Qué-Shu princess Goldmoon, who had been given the Blue Crystal Staff of the healing goddess Mishakal by her beloved, and Raistlin, whose body was weak but whose blood burned with magic. Shortly after the heroic group formed in Solace, Goldmoon became the first cleric of the true gods of light since before the Cataclysm. In the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth, Goldmoon found faith as she embraced Mishakal and recovered the Disks of Mishakal—platinum disks containing the knowledge of the gods of light.

  • Although they did not realize it at the time, the companions would become the key to the salvation of Ansalon, because of the young Qué-Shu princess Goldmoon, who had been given the Blue Crystal Staff of the healing goddess Mishakal by her beloved, and Raistlin, whose body was weak but whose blood burned with magic.
  • Shortly after the heroic group formed in Solace, Goldmoon became the first cleric of the true gods of light since before the Cataclysm.
  • In the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth, Goldmoon found faith as she embraced Mishakal and recovered the Disks of Mishakal—platinum disks containing the knowledge of the gods of light.
  • This would be pivotal to the return of other true clerics to the w orld to fight against the clerics of Takhisis.
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Although they did not realize it at the time, the companions would become the key to the salvation of Ansalon, because of the young Qué-Shu princess Goldmoon, who had been given the Blue Crystal Staff of the healing goddess Mishakal by her beloved, and Raistlin, whose body was weak but whose blood burned with magic. Shortly after the heroic group formed in Solace, Goldmoon

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