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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Silvanoshei is Alhana's son. Alhana witnessed the return of Paladine and the other gods, followed by Takhisis being made mortal and subsequently killed by Silvanoshei, who was then slain by Mina. Her son’s death crushed Alhana and drove her mad with grief for a time.Following the death of her son, a heartbroken Alhana gave up the leadership of the exiled Silvanesti all together. She abdicated the Silvanesti throne to Gilthas and departed in search of her long-lost husband with only Samar and a few hundred of her loyal warriors.
  

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Alhana witnessed the return of Paladine and the other gods, followed by Takhisis being made mortal and subsequently killed by Silvanoshei, who was then slain by Mina. Her son’s death crushed Alhana , driving her mad with grief. Following the death of her son, the heartbroken Alhana gave up the leadership of the exiled Silvanesti, abdicating the Silvanesti throne to Gilthas and departing in search of her long-lost husband with only Samar and a few hundred loyal warriors.

  • Alhana witnessed the return of Paladine and the other gods, followed by Takhisis being made mortal and subsequently killed by Silvanoshei, who was then slain by Mina.
  • Her son’s death crushed Alhana , driving her mad with grief.
  • Following the death of her son, the heartbroken Alhana gave up the leadership of the exiled Silvanesti, abdicating the Silvanesti throne to Gilthas and departing in search of her long-lost husband with only Samar and a few hundred loyal warriors.
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Alhana witnessed the return of Paladine and the other gods, followed by Takhisis being made mortal and subsequently killed by Silvanoshei, who was then slain by Mina. Her son’s death crushed Alhana, driving her mad with grief. Following the death of her son, the heartbroken Alhana gave up the leadership of the exiled Silvanesti, abdicating the Silvanesti throne to Gi

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