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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Following the death of Nightshade, Mina told Valthonis about all of the terrible things that she had done and about the constant voices in her head. What Mina truly wanted was to return to her eternal slumber, but she knew that was now impossible. Valthonis offered to lead Mina to Godshome to resolve her issues once and for all, and she agreed.
  

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Following the death of Nightshade, Mina told Valthonis of all of the terrible things she had done and about the constant voices in her head. What Mina truly wanted was to return to her eternal slumber, but she knew that was now impossible. Valthonis offered to lead Mina to Godshome to resolve her concerns once and for all, and she agreed.

  • Following the death of Nightshade, Mina told Valthonis of all of the terrible things she had done and about the constant voices in her head.
  • What Mina truly wanted was to return to her eternal slumber, but she knew that was now impossible.
  • Valthonis offered to lead Mina to Godshome to resolve her concerns once and for all, and she agreed.
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Following the death of Nightshade, Mina told Valthonis of all of the terrible things she had done and about the constant voices in her head. What Mina truly wanted was to return to her eternal slumber, but she knew that was now impossible. Valthonis offered to lead Mina to Godshome to resolve her concerns once and for all, and she agreed.

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