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The four companions found themselves transported by Mishakal to the valley of Neraka, where they noticed a minotaur war party, which they bypassed. In the valley, Mina transformed from a girl into a woman once more, and greeted Galdar, who had captured Valthonis. Mina appeared confused about events, and asked Galdar to aid her in a fight that her forces had won during the War of Souls. Galdar helped bring Mina’s mind to the present, and then showed her Valthonis, saying that Sargonnas wished her to strike down the individual who had led to the fall of Takhisis, and claim her seat beside the minotaur god in the dark pantheon. Rhys in turn told her about Valthonis being her father, and that she was in truth a god of light, and Mina’s form changed once again.
  

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The four companions were transported by Mishakal to the valley of Neraka, where they avoided a minotaur war party . In the valley, Mina tran sformed into a woman once m ore and greeted Galdar, who had captured Valthonis. Mina appeared confused: she asked Galdar to aid her in a fight that her forces had already won during the War of Souls.

  • The four companions were transported by Mishakal to the valley of Neraka, where they avoided a minotaur war party .
  • In the valley, Mina tran sformed into a woman once m ore and greeted Galdar, who had captured Valthonis.
  • Mina appeared confused: she asked Galdar to aid her in a fight that her forces had already won during the War of Souls.
  • Galdar helped return her mind to the present, and then showed her Valthonis, explaining that Sargonnas wished her to strike down the individual who had led to the fall of Tak hisis and claim her seat beside the minotaur *** in the dark pantheon.
  • When Rhys told her that Valthonis was her father, and that she was in truth a *** of light, Mina’s form changed once again.
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The four companions were transported by Mishakal to the valley of Neraka, where they avoided a minotaur war party. In the valley, Mina transformed into a woman once more and greeted Galdar, who had captured Valthonis. Mina appeared confused: she asked Galdar to aid her in a fight that her forces had already won during the War of Souls. Galdar he

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