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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this all worded correctly?

Is this all worded correctly? FYI- Mina is the girl and is part of "the group", Rhys and Atta and Nightshade are her companions and the members of "the group", and Caele and Basalt are the mages. The group used a boat to reach the small island that now housed the Tower, only to find that the isle was overrun by hundreds of Beloved. They swarmed Mina, but the girl drove them back with holy rage and kept them away from her and her companions, which allowed the group to enter the Tower and encounter Caele and Basalt. Mina then traveled through the Tower towards the Solio Febalas, only to find that the path to the vault was destroyed. However, she used her magic to transport herself, Rhys, Atta and Nightshade to the secret chamber, while the two mages followed them.
  

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The companions used a boat to reach the small island that now housed the Tower, only to find that the isle was overrun with hundreds of Beloved. They swarmed Mina, but the girl drove them back with holy rage and held them at bay , allowing the group to enter the Tower, where they encountered Caele and Basalt. Mina then traveled through the Tower towards the Solio Febalas, only to find that the path to the vault was destroyed.

— Mister Micawber

  • The companions used a boat to reach the small island that now housed the Tower, only to find that the isle was overrun with hundreds of Beloved.
  • They swarmed Mina, but the girl drove them back with holy rage and held them at bay , allowing the group to enter the Tower, where they encountered Caele and Basalt.
  • Mina then traveled through the Tower towards the Solio Febalas, only to find that the path to the vault was destroyed.
  • However, she used her magic to transport herself and her companions to the secret chamber, while the two mages followed them.
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The companions used a boat to reach the small island that now housed the Tower, only to find that the isle was overrun with hundreds of Beloved. They swarmed Mina, but the girl drove them back with holy rage and held them at bay, allowing the group to enter the Tower, where they encountered Caele and Basalt. Mina then traveled through the Tower towards the Sol
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