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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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It was not until Odila met the blind silver dragon Mirror in his human form that she realized she was not beyond redemption. Odila rescued him from an angry mob in the city of Sanction after he destroyed the dragon skull totem of Takhisis, and she was then able to finally tear off her medallion. After the two of them joined forces, they returned to the Knights’ Council and verified the information that Gerard gathered while he served as a spy in Mina’s army.
  

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It was not until Odila met the blind silver dragon Mirror in his human form that she realized she was not beyond redemption. Odila rescued him from an angry mob in the city of Sanction after he destroyed the dragon skull totem of Takhisis, and she was then able to finally tear off her medallion. The two joined forces and returned to the Knights’ Council , where they confirmed the information that Gerard had gathered while serving as a spy in Mina’s army.

  • It was not until Odila met the blind silver dragon Mirror in his human form that she realized she was not beyond redemption.
  • Odila rescued him from an angry mob in the city of Sanction after he destroyed the dragon skull totem of Takhisis, and she was then able to finally tear off her medallion.
  • The two joined forces and returned to the Knights’ Council , where they confirmed the information that Gerard had gathered while serving as a spy in Mina’s army.
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It was not until Odila met the blind silver dragon Mirror in his human form that she realized she was not beyond redemption. Odila rescued him from an angry mob in the city of Sanction after he destroyed the dragon skull totem of Takhisis, and she was then able to finally tear off her medallion. The two joined forces and returned to the Knights’ Council, where they confirmed

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