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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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After Lanther completed his conquest, Linsha was taken back to the Missing City, where she was given the choice of marrying Lanther and sailing to the homeland of the Tarmaks or going to the slave pens. Since Linsha felt that there was nothing left for her but her vow to Iyesta to guard the dragon eggs, she agreed to marry Lanther if he would give her the eggs as a betrothal gift, which he agreed too.
  

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Afte r Lanther's conquest , Linsha was returned to the Missing City, where she was given the choice of marrying Lanther and sailing to the Tarmak homeland or going to the slave pens. Since there was nothing left for her but her vow to Iyesta to guard the dragon eggs, Linsha agreed to marry Lanther if he would give her the eggs as a betrothal gift, to w hich he agreed.

  • Afte r Lanther's conquest , Linsha was returned to the Missing City, where she was given the choice of marrying Lanther and sailing to the Tarmak homeland or going to the slave pens.
  • Since there was nothing left for her but her vow to Iyesta to guard the dragon eggs, Linsha agreed to marry Lanther if he would give her the eggs as a betrothal gift, to w hich he agreed.
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After Lanther's conquest, Linsha was returned to the Missing City, where she was given the choice of marrying Lanther and sailing to the Tarmak homeland or going to the slave pens. Since there was nothing left for her but her vow to Iyesta to guard the dragon eggs, Linsha agreed to marry Lanther if he would give her the eggs as a betrothal gift, to whic

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