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To pay his debt to Mirror, Khellendros revealed to him that the One God was really the dark goddess Takhisis, and that she had managed to steal Krynn during the Chaos War in 383 AC. Khellendros also told Mirror of the part that he had played in planning the stealing of the world, and that how during the Great Storm, the other metallic dragons had heard the divine voice and tried to leave Krynn to find the gods, but it was a trap and Takhisis imprisoned them.
  

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To pay his debt to Mirror, Khellendros revealed that the One *** was really the dark goddess Takhisis, and that she had managed to steal Krynn during the Chaos War in 383 AC. Khellendros also told Mirror of his part in planning the theft of the world, and that during the Great Storm, the other metallic dragons had heard the divine voice and tried to leave Krynn to find the gods, but it had been a trap and Takhisis had imprisoned them.

  • To pay his debt to Mirror, Khellendros revealed that the One *** was really the dark goddess Takhisis, and that she had managed to steal Krynn during the Chaos War in 383 AC.
  • Khellendros also told Mirror of his part in planning the theft of the world, and that during the Great Storm, the other metallic dragons had heard the divine voice and tried to leave Krynn to find the gods, but it had been a trap and Takhisis had imprisoned them.
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To pay his debt to Mirror, Khellendros revealed that the One *** was really the dark goddess Takhisis, and that she had managed to steal Krynn during the Chaos War in 383 AC. Khellendros also told Mirror of his part in planning the theft of the world, and that during the Great Storm, the other metallic dragons had heard the divine voice and tried to leave Kryn

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