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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The mortally wounded Darlantan gave to Aurican three pieces of the moons and told his brother to swallow them, which greatly enhanced the gold dragon’s ability to use magic. Although Darlantan died of the wounds he had sustained in the war’s final battle, he was glad to see the choice that Kagonos made.
  

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Mo rtally wounde d, Darlantan gave to Aurican three pieces of the moons and told his brother to swallow them, which greatly enhanced the gold dragon’s ability to use magic. Although Darlantan died of the wounds he had sustained in the war’s final battle, he was glad to see the choice that Kagonos made.

  • Mo rtally wounde d, Darlantan gave to Aurican three pieces of the moons and told his brother to swallow them, which greatly enhanced the gold dragon’s ability to use magic.
  • Although Darlantan died of the wounds he had sustained in the war’s final battle, he was glad to see the choice that Kagonos made.
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Mortally wounded, Darlantan gave to Aurican three pieces of the moons and told his brother to swallow them, which greatly enhanced the gold dragon’s ability to use magic. Although Darlantan died of the wounds he had sustained in the war’s final battle, he was glad to see the choice that Kagonos made.

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