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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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This sent the red dragon into a rage and he immediately attacked the mercenary company, causing a massive battle to erupt in Luthcheq. Alasklerbanbastos and some lesser dragons who were allied with the dracolich arrived in the city to assist Tchazzar and his forces in battling against the combined force of Brotherhood warriors, allied Akanûlan troops, and Chessentans loyal to the former monarch, Shala Karanok.
  

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This enraged the red dragon , who immediately attacked the mercenary company, causing a massive battle in Luthcheq. Alasklerbanbastos and some lesser d ragons allied with the dracolich arrived in the city to assist Tchazzar and his forces against the combined army of Brotherhood warriors, allied Akanûlan troops, and Chessentans loyal to the former monarch, Shala Karanok.

  • This enraged the red dragon , who immediately attacked the mercenary company, causing a massive battle in Luthcheq.
  • Alasklerbanbastos and some lesser d ragons allied with the dracolich arrived in the city to assist Tchazzar and his forces against the combined army of Brotherhood warriors, allied Akanûlan troops, and Chessentans loyal to the former monarch, Shala Karanok.
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This enraged the red dragon, who immediately attacked the mercenary company, causing a massive battle in Luthcheq. Alasklerbanbastos and some lesser dragons allied with the dracolich arrived in the city to assist Tchazzar and his forces against the combined army of Brotherhood warriors, allied Akanûlan troops, and Chessentans loyal to the former monarch

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