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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Soon after, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and its orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed. This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset being slain as well as a dozen other elves.
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Soon after, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and its orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed. This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset slain as well as twelve other elves.
- Soon after, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and its orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed.
- This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset slain as well as twelve other elves.
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Soon after, Innovindil and the rest of her clan faced an assault from Clan Karuck and its orc allies in the Moonwood itself, and the elves were once again routed. This cunning attack proved much more effective than the previous one, with Innovindil and her pegasus Sunset slain as well as twelve other elves.
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Hi
That looks good to me. Strictly speaking, Pegasus refers to just one mythological horse, but I don't see why you shouldn't use it as a general word
Dave
That looks good to me. Strictly speaking, Pegasus refers to just one mythological horse, but I don't see why you shouldn't use it as a general word
Dave
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