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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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After they were rescued, Drizzt and Dahlia were taken to the stronghold of Ship Kurth and were offered an alliance with the faction, which they were forced to conditionally accept. Once the pair returned to Jarlaxle’s apartment, the conversation they were having ended with the two of them becoming lovers.
  

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Once the pair returned to Jarlaxle’s apartment, the conversation they were having ended with the two of them becoming lovers. This would be better in the simple past tense.

  • Once the pair returned to Jarlaxle’s apartment, the conversation they were having ended with the two of them becoming lovers.
  • This would be better in the simple past tense.
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Once the pair returned to Jarlaxle’s apartment, the conversation they were having ended with the two of them becoming lovers.

This would be better in the simple past tense.

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