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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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In a second battle with the black dragon, Goldmoon destroyed Khisanth with blue flame from the staff and collapsed the dragon’s lair; however, Goldmoon herself was presumed dead.
  

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In a second battle with the black dragon, Goldmoon destroyed Khisanth and the dragon's lair with blue flame from the s taff. Goldmoo n herself was presumed dead.

  • In a second battle with the black dragon, Goldmoon destroyed Khisanth and the dragon's lair with blue flame from the s taff.
  • Goldmoo n herself was presumed dead.
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In a second battle with the black dragon, Goldmoon destroyed Khisanth and the dragon's lair with blue flame from the staff. Goldmoon herself was presumed dead.

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