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While Geran endured days of imprisonment within Council Hall, his family persistently tried to secure his release, however, House Veruna and the Merchants Council refused as they were determined to hold Geran on trial, which was a right that they lawfully did not have. As the ruling powers of Hulburg continued to dispute over Geran, Hamil was able to organize the militia, which resulted in armed groups of townspeople starting to patrol the streets.
  

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While Geran endured days of imprisonment within Council Hall, his family persistently tried to secure his releas e; however, House Veruna and the Merchants Council refuse d, as they were determined to put Geran on t rial, a righ t that they did not lawfully have. As the ruling powers of Hulburg continued to dispute over Geran, Hamil organized th e militia, and armed townspeople began patrolling the streets. The conjunction 'however' is always preceded by a semi-colon and succeeded by a comma.

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  • While Geran endured days of imprisonment within Council Hall, his family persistently tried to secure his releas e; however, House Veruna and the Merchants Council refuse d, as they were determined to put Geran on t rial, a righ t that they did not lawfully have.
  • As the ruling powers of Hulburg continued to dispute over Geran, Hamil organized th e militia, and armed townspeople began patrolling the streets.
  • The conjunction 'however' is always preceded by a semi-colon and succeeded by a comma.
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While Geran endured days of imprisonment within Council Hall, his family persistently tried to secure his release; however, House Veruna and the Merchants Council refused, as they were determined to put Geran on trial, a right that they did not lawfully have. As the ruling powers of Hulburg continued to dispute over Geran, Hamil organized the militia
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