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As Bruenor and his companions traveled towards Obould’s camp, Drizzt and Hralien searched for a way to prove Tos'un’s blamelessness in the new orc offensive. After Drizzt overheard a discussion between two of the original orc conspirators that proved Tos'un’s innocence, he confirmed that the rogue drow could be trusted, and the group immediately moved to confront the orcs.
  

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As Bruenor and his companions traveled towards Obould’s camp, Drizzt and Hralien searched for a way to prove Tos'un’s blamelessness in the new orc offensive. Overhearing a discussion between two of the original orc conspirators that proved Tos'un’s innocence, Drizzt confirmed that the rogue drow could be trusted, and the group immediately moved to confront the orcs.

  • As Bruenor and his companions traveled towards Obould’s camp, Drizzt and Hralien searched for a way to prove Tos'un’s blamelessness in the new orc offensive.
  • Overhearing a discussion between two of the original orc conspirators that proved Tos'un’s innocence, Drizzt confirmed that the rogue drow could be trusted, and the group immediately moved to confront the orcs.
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As Bruenor and his companions traveled towards Obould’s camp, Drizzt and Hralien searched for a way to prove Tos'un’s blamelessness in the new orc offensive. Overhearing a discussion between two of the original orc conspirators that proved Tos'un’s innocence, Drizzt confirmed that the rogue drow could be trusted, and the group immediately moved to confront the orcs.

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