0
Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this all worded correctly?

In all the years since they departed Mithral Hall, Drizzt, Bruenor, and Pwent had continued to search for Gauntlgrym with no success, and while Nanfoodle and Jessa had journeyed with them for many years, the two eventually left their company.
  

Top answer

In all the years since they departed Mithral Hall, Drizzt, Bruenor, and Pwent had continued to search for Gauntlgrym with no success, and although Nanfoodle and Jessa had journeyed with them for many years, the two eventually left their company.

  • In all the years since they departed Mithral Hall, Drizzt, Bruenor, and Pwent had continued to search for Gauntlgrym with no success, and although Nanfoodle and Jessa had journeyed with them for many years, the two eventually left their company.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
In all the years since they departed Mithral Hall, Drizzt, Bruenor, and Pwent had continued to search for Gauntlgrym with no success, and although Nanfoodle and Jessa had journeyed with them for many years, the two eventually left their company.

Related Questions