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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Tol ordered the immediate execution of the surviving Wolves and that there heads be placed within one of the delegation’s wagons. While that was occurring, Xanderel and the genuine priests pleaded for mercy and explained that the only reason that they had helped the Wolves was because their comrades were being held hostage within the capital.
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My attempt: Tol ordered that the surviving wolves should be immediately executed and their heads should be put in one of the delegation’s wagons. Xanderel and the genuine priests pleaded for mercy and explained that they had helped the wolves only because their comrades were being held hostage in the capital. Tom
- My attempt: Tol ordered that the surviving wolves should be immediately executed and their heads should be put in one of the delegation’s wagons.
- Xanderel and the genuine priests pleaded for mercy and explained that they had helped the wolves only because their comrades were being held hostage in the capital.
- Tom
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My attempt:
Tol ordered that the surviving wolves should be immediately executed and their heads should be put in one of the delegation’s wagons. Xanderel and the genuine priests pleaded for mercy and explained that they had helped the wolves only because their comrades were being held hostage in the capital.
Tom
Tol ordered that the surviving wolves should be immediately executed and their heads should be put in one of the delegation’s wagons. Xanderel and the genuine priests pleaded for mercy and explained that they had helped the wolves only because their comrades were being held hostage in the capital.
Tom
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