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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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While Vinas worked as an underchancellor for the next two years and made a friend in his fellow priest Titus, he was not a particularly devout cleric and never found the divine connection with Paladine that granted him the ability to cast spells.
  

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Vinas worked as an underchancellor for the next two years and made a friend in his fellow priest Titus , but he was not a particularly devout cleric , and he never found the divine connection with Paladine that granted him the ability to cast spells .

  • Vinas worked as an underchancellor for the next two years and made a friend in his fellow priest Titus , but he was not a particularly devout cleric , and he never found the divine connection with Paladine that granted him the ability to cast spells .
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Vinas worked as an underchancellor for the next two years and made a friend in his fellow priest Titus, but he was not a particularly devout cleric, and he never found the divine connection with Paladine that granted him the ability to cast spells.

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