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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this all worded correctly?

There, Crysania met with Astinus the Chronicler, and learned that the Portal had been moved to the magical fortress of Zhaman. When Crysania and her two companions began the journey to Zhaman, she discovered that Paladine had not totally abandoned her.
  

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Technically, your second comma isn't necessary, but I think the sentence reads better with it

  • Technically, your second comma isn't necessary, but I think the sentence reads better with it
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Technically, your second comma isn't necessary, but I think the sentence reads better with it

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