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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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A number of years before the War of the Lance, Khisanth was awakened by a pair of nyphids (a type of lightning fairy) who sought her aid. Over a short period of time, Khisanth actually befriended the two nyphids, Kadagan and Joad.
  

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A number of years before the War of the Lance, Khisanth was awakened by a pair of nyphids (a type of lightning fairy) who sought her aid. Soon, Khisanth befriended the two nyphids, Kadagan and Joad.

  • A number of years before the War of the Lance, Khisanth was awakened by a pair of nyphids (a type of lightning fairy) who sought her aid.
  • Soon, Khisanth befriended the two nyphids, Kadagan and Joad.
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A number of years before the War of the Lance, Khisanth was awakened by a pair of nyphids (a type of lightning fairy) who sought her aid. Soon, Khisanth befriended the two nyphids, Kadagan and Joad.

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