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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this all properly worded, particularly the second sentence?

The unknown highlord took his orders from Highlord Phair Caron of the Red Wing, and the Green Wing assisted in the critical fighting at Valkinord and North Keep. Ultimately, the Green Wing mainly provided support to the Red Dragonarmy during the invasion, but they had a crucial role in the conquering of Nordmaar.
  

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cboutin3 but they also had a crucial role This goes better after but .

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  • cboutin3 but they also had a crucial role This goes better after but .
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cboutin3but they also had a crucial role
This goes better after but.
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