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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this all properly worded and structured?

After Tika kicked Caramon out of their house in 356 AC, he and Tasslehoff were sent along with Crysania Tarinius, a cleric of Paladine, to protect her on the journey from Solace to the Tower of High Sorcery in Wayreth. On the way to the Tower, Crysania was attacked by the death knight Lord Soth, but was saved from death by the intervention of Paladine.
  

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cboutin3 Soth, but was saved from This comma is optional, but I would use it.

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  • cboutin3 Soth, but was saved from This comma is optional, but I would use it.
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cboutin3Soth, but was saved from
This comma is optional, but I would use it.
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After Tika kicked Caramon out of their house This modern idiom clashes with your overall style.

say eg After Tika cast Caramon from of their dwelling

Clive
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Thanks for your help, does this revision work? After Tika cast Caramon from their house...
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Yes, but I like mine better.
eg After Tika cast Caramon from their dwelling
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