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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this all correctly worded and structured?

FYI- Cyan is the green dragon. The red dragon, unfortunately for Cyan, was a special favorite of the Dark Queen’s, and the goddess imprisoned Cyan beneath Neraka, ostensibly for this crime, but it was suspected that she had begun to see the cunning and self-interested the green dragon as a threat to her control over her minions.
  

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I try not to use what some call a double possessive: of the Dark Queen 's . Possible: one of the Dark Queen's favorites; a special favorite of the Dark Queen. I am assuming that the "goddess" is the same person as the queen.

  • I try not to use what some call a double possessive: of the Dark Queen 's .
  • Possible: one of the Dark Queen's favorites; a special favorite of the Dark Queen.
  • I am assuming that the "goddess" is the same person as the queen.
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I try not to use what some call a double possessive: of the Dark Queen's. Possible: one of the Dark Queen's favorites; a special favorite of the Dark Queen.
I am assuming that the "goddess" is the same person as the queen.

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