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Two days later, Daltigoth celebrated the founding of the Tower of Sorcery with a grand ceremony in the Inner City, and Tol was told to meet the mages once again at the Wizard’s College that night. Tol was met by Yoralyn, the White-Robe Oropash, and the Red-Robe Helbin, who revealed to the young warrior that his immunity to magic was caused by the ancient Irda circlet that he had discovered two years before. The relic was called a nullstone: it was extremely rare and would protect its holder from even the strongest magic. The three wizards told Tol to destroy the nullstone, since if anyone discovered that he possessed one, it would mean the death of him and all those he cared about. However, Tol decided to keep the powerful relic since he thought that it was too valuable to be destroyed.
  

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Two days later, Daltigoth celebrated the founding of the Tower of Sorcery with a grand ceremony in the Inner City, and Tol was told to meet the mages once again at the Wizard’s College that night. He was met by Yoralyn, the White-Robed Oropash, and the Red-Robed Helbin, who revealed to the young warrior that his immunity to magic was the effect of the ancient Irda circlet that he had discovered two years before. The relic was called a nullstone: it was extremely rare and would protect its holder from even the strongest magic.

  • Two days later, Daltigoth celebrated the founding of the Tower of Sorcery with a grand ceremony in the Inner City, and Tol was told to meet the mages once again at the Wizard’s College that night.
  • He was met by Yoralyn, the White-Robed Oropash, and the Red-Robed Helbin, who revealed to the young warrior that his immunity to magic was the effect of the ancient Irda circlet that he had discovered two years before.
  • The relic was called a nullstone: it was extremely rare and would protect its holder from even the strongest magic.
  • The three wizards told Tol to destroy the nullstone, since if it was discovered, it would mean the death of him and all those he cared about.
  • However, Tol decided to keep the powerful relic, thinking that it was too valuable to be destroyed.
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Two days later, Daltigoth celebrated the founding of the Tower of Sorcery with a grand ceremony in the Inner City, and Tol was told to meet the mages once again at the Wizard’s College that night. He was met by Yoralyn, the White-Robed Oropash, and the Red-Robed Helbin, who revealed to the young warrior that his immunity to magic was the effect of the ancient Irda circlet that he had discovered

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