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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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While that was occurring in the city, Tol and a small escort arrived at the Ergothian camp after a two day journey from the Isle of Elms. Tol told Tylocost about the nomad’s final defeat and that the full strength of the Army of the East would not arrive for another day. The elf explained to Tol about Zala’s discoveries in Caergoth and the mission that was occurring at that moment. Hearing this news, Tol decided to assemble the small amount of forces under his command and present them to the city.
  

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Meanwhile, Tol and a small escort arrived at the Ergothian camp after a two-day journey from the Isle of Elms. Tol informed Tylocost that the nomad had been defeated and that the full strength of the Army of the East would not arrive for another day. The elf told Tol of Zala’s discoveries in Caergoth and the mission that was occurring at that moment.

— Mister Micawber

  • Meanwhile, Tol and a small escort arrived at the Ergothian camp after a two-day journey from the Isle of Elms.
  • Tol informed Tylocost that the nomad had been defeated and that the full strength of the Army of the East would not arrive for another day.
  • The elf told Tol of Zala’s discoveries in Caergoth and the mission that was occurring at that moment.
  • Tol then decided to assemble the small number of forces under his command and present them to the city.
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Meanwhile, Tol and a small escort arrived at the Ergothian camp after a two-day journey from the Isle of Elms. Tol informed Tylocost that the nomad had been defeated and that the full strength of the Army of the East would not arrive for another day. The elf told Tol of Zala’s discoveries in Caergoth and the mission that was occurring at that moment. Tol then decided to assemble the small numb
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