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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The imperial court agreed with Egrin’s reasoning and determined that the rogue wizard was also responsible for the other disasters that were afflicting the empire. The council decided that something had to be immediately done to handle this problem, which resulted in Tol volunteering to travel alone to Mount Axas to slay Mandes. That night, Tol and Valaran met in the palace library and made love together for the first time in years before the warlord then revealed the powers of the nullstone to her.
  

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The imperial court agreed with Egrin’s reasoning and determined that the rogue wizard was also responsible for the other disasters afflicting the empire. The council decided to act immediately on this problem, and Tol volunteered to travel alone to Mount Axas to slay Mandes. That night, Tol and Valaran met in the palace library and made love for the first time in years.

  • The imperial court agreed with Egrin’s reasoning and determined that the rogue wizard was also responsible for the other disasters afflicting the empire.
  • The council decided to act immediately on this problem, and Tol volunteered to travel alone to Mount Axas to slay Mandes.
  • That night, Tol and Valaran met in the palace library and made love for the first time in years.
  • Then the warlord revealed the powers of the nullstone to her.
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The imperial court agreed with Egrin’s reasoning and determined that the rogue wizard was also responsible for the other disasters afflicting the empire. The council decided to act immediately on this problem, and Tol volunteered to travel alone to Mount Axas to slay Mandes. That night, Tol and Valaran met in the palace library and made love for the first time in years. Then the warlord reveal

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