0
Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this all correctly worded?

Soon thereafter, they were attacked by a group of Shadovar, and Dahlia exhibited a brutality that Drizzt had never seen in her before and did not understand, which reminded him that there was much that he did not know about her. Meanwhile, Barrabus and Effron were assigned to work together and to hunt down Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood.
  

Top answer

Soon thereafter, they were attacked by a group of Shadovar, and Dahlia exhibited a brutality that Drizzt had never seen in her and did not und erstand. There was much that he did not know about her. Meanwhile, Barrabus and Effron were assigned to work to gether to hunt down Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood.

  • Soon thereafter, they were attacked by a group of Shadovar, and Dahlia exhibited a brutality that Drizzt had never seen in her and did not und erstand.
  • There was much that he did not know about her.
  • Meanwhile, Barrabus and Effron were assigned to work to gether to hunt down Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
Soon thereafter, they were attacked by a group of Shadovar, and Dahlia exhibited a brutality that Drizzt had never seen in her and did not understand. There was much that he did not know about her. Meanwhile, Barrabus and Effron were assigned to work together to hunt down Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood.

Related Questions