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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Takhisis is the goddess and Dark Queen, and Silvanoshei is the elf king. Takhisis was made mortal by this action, and in her rage she attacked Mina, who she blamed for her defeat. Mina was going to allow her beloved goddess to slay her, but Silvanoshei, who was still in love with her, threw a broken dragonlance at Takhisis, impaling and killing the Dark Queen. Infuriated by Silvanoshei’s actions, Mina took up Takhisis’s sword and killed the elf king.
  

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This made Takhisis mortal, and in her rage she attacked Mina, whom she blamed for her defeat. Mina would have allowed her beloved goddess to slay her, but Silvanoshei, still in love with her, threw a broken dragonlance at Takhisis, fatally impaling the Dark Queen. Infuriated by Silvanoshei’s act, Mina seized Takhisis’s sword and killed the elf king.

  • This made Takhisis mortal, and in her rage she attacked Mina, whom she blamed for her defeat.
  • Mina would have allowed her beloved goddess to slay her, but Silvanoshei, still in love with her, threw a broken dragonlance at Takhisis, fatally impaling the Dark Queen.
  • Infuriated by Silvanoshei’s act, Mina seized Takhisis’s sword and killed the elf king.
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This made Takhisis mortal, and in her rage she attacked Mina, whom she blamed for her defeat. Mina would have allowed her beloved goddess to slay her, but Silvanoshei, still in love with her, threw a broken dragonlance at Takhisis, fatally impaling the Dark Queen. Infuriated by Silvanoshei’s act, Mina seized Takhisis’s sword and killed the elf ki

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