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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this all correctly worded?
The meeting occurred that night, and the terms of the city-state’s surrender were negotiated between the Ergothian and Tarsan leaders. The morning after the meeting, Tarsis opened its gates and officially surrendered to the empire’s armies.
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This is okay. You might want to say "the following morning" instead of "the morning after the meeting" to make it read a little more smoothly.
- This is okay.
- You might want to say "the following morning" instead of "the morning after the meeting" to make it read a little more smoothly.
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This is okay. You might want to say "the following morning" instead of "the morning after the meeting" to make it read a little more smoothly.
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