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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this all correct with the comma use?

Quelled by the disasters, the Kingpriest decided to arrange a deal with the Orders of High Sorcery. The wizards would leave the Towers of Palanthas and Istar, and, in turn, the Orders would be allowed to remain in Wayreth unmolested by the Kingpriest’s forces.
  

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Daunted by the disasters, the Kingpriest decided to come to terms with the Orders of High Sorcery. The wizards would leave the Towers of Palanthas and Istar, a nd in t urn, the Orders would be allowed to remain in Wayreth unmolested by the Kingpriest’s forces.

  • Daunted by the disasters, the Kingpriest decided to come to terms with the Orders of High Sorcery.
  • The wizards would leave the Towers of Palanthas and Istar, a nd in t urn, the Orders would be allowed to remain in Wayreth unmolested by the Kingpriest’s forces.
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Daunted by the disasters, the Kingpriest decided to come to terms with the Orders of High Sorcery. The wizards would leave the Towers of Palanthas and Istar, and in turn, the Orders would be allowed to remain in Wayreth unmolested by the Kingpriest’s forces.

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