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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this all correct or do I need to add some commas?

Beryllinthranox’s scales lost their emerald sheen, and became a foul putrid rotting green, and her teeth became yellowed and decayed.
  

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cboutin3 Is this all correct or do I need to add some commas? You need to delete the first one.

  • cboutin3 Is this all correct or do I need to add some commas?
  • You need to delete the first one.
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cboutin3Is this all correct or do I need to add some commas?
You need to delete the first one.

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