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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Leaving Raryn to assist the monks in the Monastery of the Yellow Rose’s defense, Dorn and Kara traveled to the hidden refuge of the slumbering metallic dragons within the Galena Mountains (in order) to present them with the temporary antidote for frenzy and gain their aid against Malazan’s besieging force. However, Lareth had been nearly consumed by madness as a result of the Rage and refused to believe the companions’ story. This unreasonable judgment forced Lareth’s chief lieutenant, the gold dragon Tamarand, to reluctantly challenge him for the position of leadership of the metallic dragons.
  

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Leaving Raryn to assist the monks in the defense of the Monastery of the Yellow Rose, Dorn and Kara traveled to the hidden refuge of the slumbering metallic dragons within the Galena Mountai ns t o present them with the temporary antidote for frenzy and enlist their aid against Malazan’s siege. However, Lareth had been nearly consumed by the madness of the Rage and refused to believe the companions’ s tory, forcing Lareth’s chief lieutenant, the gold dragon Tamarand, to challenge him for t he leadership of the metallic dragons.

  • Leaving Raryn to assist the monks in the defense of the Monastery of the Yellow Rose, Dorn and Kara traveled to the hidden refuge of the slumbering metallic dragons within the Galena Mountai ns t o present them with the temporary antidote for frenzy and enlist their aid against Malazan’s siege.
  • However, Lareth had been nearly consumed by the madness of the Rage and refused to believe the companions’ s tory, forcing Lareth’s chief lieutenant, the gold dragon Tamarand, to challenge him for t he leadership of the metallic dragons.
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Leaving Raryn to assist the monks in the defense of the Monastery of the Yellow Rose, Dorn and Kara traveled to the hidden refuge of the slumbering metallic dragons within the Galena Mountains to present them with the temporary antidote for frenzy and enlist their aid against Malazan’s siege. However, Lareth had been nearly consumed by the madness of the Rage

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