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After Tol departed to meet with Valaran, Yoralyn ordered for a spy to be hired to follow and observe the young warrior. Valaran and Tol became immediate good friends, and the pair arranged for an adventure into the Outer City, which was a place that Valaran was forbidden to enter. That night, the two young Ergothians were able to leave the Inner City with the help of the Dom-shu sisters. After a night of adventure in the city, which included a tavern fight and a confrontation with the mages’ hired spy, Tol and Valaran ended the night with a kiss.
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After Tol departed to meet with Valaran, Yoralyn employed a spy to follow the young warrior. Valaran and Tol became immediate good friends, and the pair arranged for an adventure into the Outer Cit y, a pla ce that Valaran was forbidden to enter. That night, the two young Ergothians left the Inner City with the help of the Dom-shu sisters.
- After Tol departed to meet with Valaran, Yoralyn employed a spy to follow the young warrior.
- Valaran and Tol became immediate good friends, and the pair arranged for an adventure into the Outer Cit y, a pla ce that Valaran was forbidden to enter.
- That night, the two young Ergothians left the Inner City with the help of the Dom-shu sisters.
- After a night of adventure, including a tavern brawl and a confrontation with the mages’ hired spy, Tol and Valaran ended the night with a kiss.
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After Tol departed to meet with Valaran, Yoralyn employed a spy to follow the young warrior. Valaran and Tol became immediate good friends, and the pair arranged for an adventure into the Outer City, a place that Valaran was forbidden to enter. That night, the two young Ergothians left the Inner City with the help of the Dom-shu sisters. After a night of adventure, inclu
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