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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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After several days of work, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the text on the scrolls from the underground city, which was a language that was a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
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After several days, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the underground city's scroll texts, which were in a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
- After several days, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the underground city's scroll texts, which were in a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
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After several days, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the underground city's scroll texts, which were in a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
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Would this revision be correct? After several days of work, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the scrolls from the underground city, which were written in a language that was a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
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Not so good; in fact, I would revise my own revision:
After several days, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the underground city's scroll texts, a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
After several days, Nanfoodle and Regis deciphered the underground city's scroll texts, a mixture of dwarven and orcish alphabets.
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