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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Sylora is the sorceress. Although deranged, Valindra had moments of clarity and cunning, which she used to convince Szass to spare the pair’s lives. As a result, Szass gave Sylora a magical wand that allowed her to channel the powers of the Dread Ring, and commanded the sorceress to destroy the Sword Coast city of Neverwinter and use the carnage to complete the Dread Ring.
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The deranged Valin dra had moments of clarity and cunning, which she used to convince Szass to spare their lives. Szass then gave Sylora a magic wand allowing her to channel the powers of the Dread R ing and commanded the sorceress to destroy the Sword Coast city of Neverwinte r, whose carnage completed the Ring.
- The deranged Valin dra had moments of clarity and cunning, which she used to convince Szass to spare their lives.
- Szass then gave Sylora a magic wand allowing her to channel the powers of the Dread R ing and commanded the sorceress to destroy the Sword Coast city of Neverwinte r, whose carnage completed the Ring.
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The deranged Valindra had moments of clarity and cunning, which she used to convince Szass to spare their lives. Szass then gave Sylora a magic wand allowing her to channel the powers of the Dread Ring and commanded the sorceress to destroy the Sword Coast city of Neverwinter, whose carnage completed the Ring.
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Thanks, I should have added this sentence before that one for content purposes, does this change the revision at all? Before Szass could kill Sylora and Jestry, the insane lich http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Valindra_Shadowmantle&action=edit&redlink=1 arrive
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Before Szass could kill Sylora and Jestry, the insane lich Valindra Shadowmantle arrived at the Dread Ring. The deranged Valindra had moments of clarity and cunning, which she used to convince Szass to spare their lives. Szass then gave Sylora a magic wand allowing her to channel the powers of the Dread Ring and commanded the sorceress to destroy the Sword Coast city of Neverwinte
Before Szass could kill Sylora and Jestry, the insane lich Valindra Shadowmantle arrived at the Dread Ring. The deranged Valindra had moments of clarity and cunning, which she used to convince Szass to spare their lives. Szass then gave Sylora a magic wand allowing her to channel the powers of the Dread Ring and commanded the sorceress to destroy the Sword Coast city of Neverwinte
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