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While that was occurring, Khondar obtained the six magical keys needed to disable the wards of Ahghairon’s Tower and hoped to enter the stronghold and use its power to gain control of Waterdeep. Now fully in control of her abilities, Vajra made Laraelra the heir to the Blackstaff before she and her comrades confronted Khondar, who was attempting to enter Ahghairon’s Tower. Together, the group was able to thwart Khondar’s plans and stop him from entering the magical tower. Vajra then sent spectral wolves against Khondar, and the magical creatures tore him to shreds.
  

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While that was occurring, Khondar obtained the six magical keys needed to disable the wards of Ahghairon’s Towe r, hoping to enter that stronghold and use its power to gain control of Waterdeep. Now fully in control of her abilities, Vajra made Laraelra the heir to the Blackstaff before she and her comrades confronted Khondar, who was attempting to enter Ahghairon’s Tower. The group thwarted Khondar’s plans, preventing his entry into the magical tower.

— Mister Micawber

  • While that was occurring, Khondar obtained the six magical keys needed to disable the wards of Ahghairon’s Towe r, hoping to enter that stronghold and use its power to gain control of Waterdeep.
  • Now fully in control of her abilities, Vajra made Laraelra the heir to the Blackstaff before she and her comrades confronted Khondar, who was attempting to enter Ahghairon’s Tower.
  • The group thwarted Khondar’s plans, preventing his entry into the magical tower.
  • Vajra then sent spectral wolves against Khondar, and the magical creatures tore him to shreds.
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While that was occurring, Khondar obtained the six magical keys needed to disable the wards of Ahghairon’s Tower, hoping to enter that stronghold and use its power to gain control of Waterdeep. Now fully in control of her abilities, Vajra made Laraelra the heir to the Blackstaff before she and her comrades confronted Khondar, who was attempting to enter Ahghairon’s Tower. The
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