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Tasslehoff and Goldmoon then noticed the spirits of the dead lingering in the world; spirits who had been unable to travel along the River of Souls and who were the cause of the fading magic. When Takhisis had stolen the world, she had broken the connection between the River of Time and the River of Souls, which left the spirits of all those who had died following the Chaos War unable to progress to the next life.
  

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Tasslehoff and Goldmoon then noticed the spirits of the dead lingering in the w orld—spiri ts who had been unable to travel along the River of Souls and who were the cause of the fading magic. When Takhisis had stolen the world, she had broken the connection between the River of Time and the River of Souls, leaving the spirits of all those who had died following the Chaos War unable to progress to the next life.

  • Tasslehoff and Goldmoon then noticed the spirits of the dead lingering in the w orld—spiri ts who had been unable to travel along the River of Souls and who were the cause of the fading magic.
  • When Takhisis had stolen the world, she had broken the connection between the River of Time and the River of Souls, leaving the spirits of all those who had died following the Chaos War unable to progress to the next life.
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Tasslehoff and Goldmoon then noticed the spirits of the dead lingering in the world—spirits who had been unable to travel along the River of Souls and who were the cause of the fading magic. When Takhisis had stolen the world, she had broken the connection between the River of Time and the River of Souls, leaving the spirits of all those who had died following the Chaos War unable

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