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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this all correct?

The group made to leave the Tower, only to find their way blocked by the vast force of Beloved. Mina grew fearful, but after some prompting from Nightshade, she seemed to remember the Beloved and was transformed back into her adult self. After she used holy fire to destroy all of the Beloved, she reverted back to a young girl and asked the three companions to take her to Godshome.
  

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The group made to leave the Tower, only to find their way blocked by the vast force of the Beloved. Mina grew fearful, but after some prompting from Nightshade no comma s he seemed to remember the Beloved and was transformed back into her adult self. After she used holy fire to destroy all of the Beloved, she reverted back to a young girl and asked the three companions to take her to Godshome.

— Clive

  • The group made to leave the Tower, only to find their way blocked by the vast force of the Beloved.
  • Mina grew fearful, but after some prompting from Nightshade no comma s he seemed to remember the Beloved and was transformed back into her adult self.
  • After she used holy fire to destroy all of the Beloved, she reverted back to a young girl and asked the three companions to take her to Godshome.
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The group made to leave the Tower, only to find their way blocked by the vast force of the Beloved. Mina grew fearful, but after some prompting from Nightshade no comma she seemed to remember the Beloved and was transformed back into her adult self. After she used holy fire to destroy all o
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Thanks for your help Clive. I have done most of the main story and am now reading through and reviewing it all to improve on my original writing.
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