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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Mina asked Galdar for his sword so that she could strike down the defenseless Valthonis, but the one-armed minotaur told Mina that he honestly believed that she should not take Takhisis’s place in the pantheon, nor kill Valthonis in cold blood. Wishing to have no more to do with the proceedings, Galdar walked away; however, Mina leapt after him, attacking the minotaur in a rage and beating him senseless. Rhys tried to stop Mina and was also beaten into unconsciousness, and Atta was wounded by a vicious strike of the woman’s sword. Finally, Nightshade tried to stop Mina from attacking, but she viciously broke his neck, killing the kender.
  

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Mina asked Galdar for his sword in order to strike down the defenseless Valthonis, but the one-armed minotaur contended that she should not take Takhisis’s place in the panthe on o r kill Valthonis in cold blood. Wishing to have no more to do this , Galdar walked aw ay, but Mina leapt after him, attacked the minotaur in a rage and beat him senseless. Rhys tried to stop her but was also beaten unconscious , while Atta was wounded by a vicious stroke of the woman’s sword.

  • Mina asked Galdar for his sword in order to strike down the defenseless Valthonis, but the one-armed minotaur contended that she should not take Takhisis’s place in the panthe on o r kill Valthonis in cold blood.
  • Wishing to have no more to do this , Galdar walked aw ay, but Mina leapt after him, attacked the minotaur in a rage and beat him senseless.
  • Rhys tried to stop her but was also beaten unconscious , while Atta was wounded by a vicious stroke of the woman’s sword.
  • Nightshade too tried to stop Mina, but she broke his neck, killing the kender.
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Mina asked Galdar for his sword in order to strike down the defenseless Valthonis, but the one-armed minotaur contended that she should not take Takhisis’s place in the pantheon or kill Valthonis in cold blood. Wishing to have no more to do this, Galdar walked away, but Mina leapt after him, attacked the minotaur in a rage and beat him senseless.

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